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Wednesday, November 15, 2017

THE BLACKBERRY WITCH: chapter 4


IV. Thistles and Briars

When Thursday’s dawn descended into Mídhel and coiled around the homes and shops to take its well-deserved nap, it was surprised to find a young boy walking with determined purpose through the streets, a boy it had never seen up and about this early in the day. The boy was acting strangely; in fact, he seemed to be fleeing the dawn, for every step carried him farther and farther west. Odd behavior, especially for one who loved to drowse late in bed so often.

This didn’t matter to Thursday’s dawn; it settled happily into the otherwise empty streets and stretched out to sleep.

Nearly an hour before dawn had arisen in the east, Thomas had jumped up from his bed, collected his things, and crept downstairs for a quick breakfast. He’d found his father in the kitchen, eating his usual meal of oats and milk and bread with honey. Thomas had taken a few bites, just enough to quiet his stomach, and then informed his father that he was heading out early to do some exploring and wouldn’t be back until much later in the day.

His father assented and told Thomas to be careful, then turned back to enjoy the rest of his meal in the quiet still hours before anyone else was up.

As he hurried through the streets toward the hills, Thomas wondered how he was going to collect the fragment of boar’s tusk. His first problem would be finding a boar, and that wasn’t so much as problem as it was the entrance to a much larger problem. Thomas had never faced a live boar himself, of course, but he’d heard the stories of the great hunts and fierce encounters so often told at the hearthside; he’d even eaten roasted boar’s meat on a few occasions after particularly successful expeditions by the hunting men of Mídhel.

Those stories were more than enough to warn Thomas of the dangers of live boars. He had therefore decided that he would try to find a fragment of boar’s tusk on the ground somewhere, hopefully from a boar that was either long dead or long gone. That would be much simpler indeed.

Even so, that plan had a few problems, and the first was that Thomas didn’t know where boars might live in the western hills. He’d never seen them in the berry patches, of course. He’d never ventured into the deeper shadows of the hills farther west, where the light of the sun disappeared into hollows and crooks and the vines became impenetrable tangles. He doubted that boars would want to live in a place like that.

Thomas had spent a little time in the northern stretch of the hills, the downs near Palewater Bog, and he hadn’t seen any boars or boar-dens there. He knew that his ignorance of the living and sleeping habits of boars meant that there could very well be a dozen boars hiding in the downs, but he had decided upon a different route first; he would save the downs as a last resort.

When the road that led westward from Mídhel split into left and right forks, Thomas took the leftward path, which angled south into hillier country and thicker woodland. This was his first choice for finding a fragment of boar’s tusk: shady, quiet, and relatively peaceful, with plenty of furrows and crooks and overhangs in which a tired boar might lie for a rest. He assumed, based on admittedly limited knowledge, that these wooded hills would seem attractive to boars. Especially old, weary boars that wouldn’t mind losing a bit of tusk.

This was an area that Thomas had explored only once or twice, so when the formal path ended and he stepped into the untamed woods, he was careful to take note of the sun and the nearby landmarks and the direction of the wind. He had faith in his pathfinding ability, but there was no telling what trickery lurked in the shadows ahead.

This Thursday morning proved overcast and windy as Thomas hiked farther into the hills. The sunlight, already filtered by broad-leafed trees in various shades, was shrouded by puffy gray clouds that crept over the sky from the northeast. Thomas caught glimpses of their movements through the trees; they looked like fat colorless caterpillars, each step a slow ripple. Soon the woods were dark as dusk.

The wind accompanied Thomas from the road, riding on his shoulder and leaping at times to ruffle his hair or pinch his fingertips or swirl the leaves on the ground. When the wind died, as it did from time to time, Thomas could hear the crunching of leaves and sticks. The sound of his footfalls was louder than the muffled animal noises of the woods; louder than it should have been, Thomas thought.

He was grateful when the wind picked up again, even though it stung his ears. He tugged the knit cap down a little and hunched his shoulders and kept walking.

Presently he encountered a low wall of brambles blocking the way forward. These bushes bore no fruit, but their thorns were sharp and long and thick. Thomas peered at the tangled mass, carefully parting a few of the leaves to look for a place to slip through. But it seemed as though the brambles were impenetrable, at least at this place.

Thomas walked alongside them for a little way, making sure he kept track in his head of how many steps he’d taken so that he could find the path again. At twenty paces, he saw a low opening under the thorns. Dropping to his knees, he wiggled underneath the brambles, successfully emerging on the other side without so much as a snagged thread on his jacket.

The underbrush on the other side was free of thorns, so Thomas continued on. He watched the trees and leaves as he walked, appreciating their various hues and the size and strength of the trunks here. Every so often he came upon another patch of brambles and was forced to search for an opening.

The morning wore on and Thomas’s mind wandered. He kept walking, a slow steady pace, his eyes jumping from the ground to the trees to the cloudy sky barely visible above. He had to remind himself periodically to watch for boar tusks hidden in the fallen leaves and to listen for the grunting and gnashing that would surely signify a live boar on his scent. But with each step he became more distracted by the peaceful and majestic woodland.

Every so often, when the brambles were too thick or pointy, Thomas’s feet would carry him up the side of a hill. He skirted the hillsides and breathed in the fresh crisp air and peered out at the forest around him. Then he descended again, clear of the brambles, and continued on his trek, keeping as close as he could to a straight line southwest of the road.

When the brambles thickened, Thomas slowed. His mind returned to the task at hand. He paused carefully every dozen steps or so, peering around and kicking up a few of the leaf-piles. Underneath one he found a smooth stone; beneath another, he watched a snail, suddenly exposed, trudge through the dirt toward the safety of a bush.

But he did not see any boar tusks, so he kept walking. The brambles got thicker still, forcing him a little farther afield and down into a long low valley between two hills that were crowned with massive oaks and cedars and birches and yews. His mind wandered again, turning toward Eleanor and her plight. Thomas hoped she was okay. He didn’t like thinking about where Eleanor was at that moment, but he wondered if she was warm enough and if the witch had given her any food or drink. He wondered if Eleanor knew that this was his fault, and if she was angry with him, or maybe too scared to be angry.

The light dimmed and the wind chilled and Thomas’s thoughts returned to the present and he stopped walking. He looked around. He’d followed the slope into a thistledown valley; the white puffs dotted the brush around him in every direction. Thomas noted with dissatisfaction that he could also see brambles and briars and thorn-bushes before him and to either side as well. This way was no good; he’d need to turn back, find a different path. Besides, the thistledown would probably make him sneeze.

Thomas turned around. He saw only thistles and briars behind him. He frowned. That didn’t seem right. He’d come this way, and it had been an easy walk.

Thomas turned in a complete circle. He saw briars all around him and no apparent avenue of escape. He sighed, looking down at his jacket, resigned to the fate of scratching the sleeves and pulling loose more than a few threads, as would surely happen when he pushed his way back through the briars. But there was nothing for it.

His attention was diverted suddenly by a rustling in the thistledown. He whirled around. It was distant still, and he couldn’t pinpoint the location, but it was definitely something, not just an imagined fear. The rustling grew louder and a few of the white puffs floated up into the sky to tangle in the oak-leaves.

Thomas took a few steps backward. The rustling mirrored his movements. Something pushed through the brambles toward him. Any hope he had of an easy escape vanished when the rustling was joined by snuffling and grunting and growling. They were low muted sounds, rumbles, deep and heavy. They were not, Thomas knew, sounds made by squirrels or snails or the wind.

They were sounds made by boars, or by animals enough like boars to make no difference to an unarmed twelve-year-old boy trapped by the briars.

Thomas swallowed hard. The rustling neared a bit more, the growling growing a bit more insistent. A bird cawed nearby, high in one of the trees, and flew away. That surely wasn’t good either.

Feeling panic creeping over him, Thomas crouched down and scrabbled around in the dirt to look for a makeshift weapon. He never took his eyes from the rustling of the thistledown and the shaking brambles. His questing hands found nothing—no rock, no bramble-branch, no long sticks. Perhaps he could throw his spyglass, if he could pull it from his satchel quickly enough.

Thomas doubted the spyglass would save him from being gored, but he decided to reach for it quickly. He lifted his hand to his hip, where the satchel rested. The rustling continued, the snuffling a wet and hungry sound now.

And then a tiny voice broke through the boar-sounds, so high and faint that Thomas might have imagined it completely. “Over here!” said the voice. “Quick!”

Thomas couldn’t see the source of the voice, but he did see a hole in the brambles. It wasn’t big enough for him to pass through cleanly, but it was better than dying a bloody death.

Deciding on impulse to trust the strange voice, Thomas dived through the hole in the brambles.

To his great surprise, he tumbled all the way through and landed in a small dirt-filled den, a hollow beneath the bramble-patch, a shelter with an overhanging lattice of thorns that was just big enough for him.


To his greater surprise, Thomas looked up into the face of a small mouse wearing a mask.

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